Christopher+Sowell

One day in after school i came home and my mom tells me she won the super boll tickits. I was lost in excitement and she seid tomarow we  will all go. Me my mom and brother the next day we get up and get drest to go but when we get there was a long long line from the entres to the checkin spot. So we come back in ten minits and the line is shorter so when we get in we go to the snack stand. So when we go to are seets we could not sit down because it was so crowded. So we bot a booth seat then we had to shere the room so when i tack my seat. The mans sone spils his pop on me and i go and change. Good job Chris... you did a good job with this three element story. I like the creativity that you have shown in story writing. Make sure you are working hard for an entire period. You can do it. Keep it up.ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

A walk. A walk i had whent on was to game stop so on my way i sean a lot of black and wite and red cars. So when i came down my street my dog was foling me to school i had to tack him back home.So i was late to school and i

Chris- You have some good work here and some work that is missing. You need to keep working hard if you want to succeed in this class. You can and will grow as a writer, but you have to keep stretching yourself and doing the best you can. You can do it.

A high school drop out. One day in wilkines burg school there was a new high school student. He in all turnitv class so he is with all the back kids so he trys to get out of all turnitiv by the end of the year he gets out. then he gets in a big fight 3 days later he dicise to drop out of school then gose live with his dad and dose not come back.

I was in a stolin suv then i was trying to macke a deposit. So i disied to mack a drive throow the pnc to get my dipoit but it did not work so well. It stop in the glass so got out and ran as fast is i could. Alos i was on drugs at the time plus i need the money for more.

When i was yong i acoplished a lot like staing away from drugs and vilens and staing in school. after i gragwatited from school i went and got my brother from my moms hous for the sumer and i got them a job. the was at wallmar stacking shelvs so i went to new york.

Bonecrusher is my name and and i go to wilkins bugr high school and i am trying not to leav out of class. I am haveing a problem with my body cuz i had got bolts put in my lages cuz I had a lage problem so when I was under the rong medesen and I took to much. So the next day I looked in the mirror and i sean a diffrints in my appearance like I was geting bulkeyer day by day. So I go back to the hospitle to see what is happened they sied that im just geting better all I could say is i cannt bleeve it. So all i could see is a good looking guy I go back to work at the construction site and i tryed to lift a big truck and i could so i whent and helped a older lady and i felt good about it so i stertid to help people. The next day tryed to see if i hand a nother power i did it was the power to pull parts of bones out of me so i made a bone sored. so as i trane i find more new powers like supper spead and stranth. Also i have the power to teleport so i am geting good at controling my powers. Yeah but im geting better at it so im in school the next day when i got there ever one was looking at me because i looked diffrent. Igo to the bath room and a gorp of people come in after me so i go in to the stalls and wate they look then do not see me and leve os get out and go back to class. My teacher ask what took so long and don't answer her so she sends me to the offece with a rufurle for no reezon Chris- I like what you have here. It has good development of you character. YOu can keep going though, what does you super hero do now that he has noticed that he has super powers? Does he go back to school? Keep writing. YOu are doing well.

It was a woder riss day at pssa time you could smell pensell shavings in the air. The halls were empty becaus every one was in class getin redy for the test so when I got in to class there was a test with my name on it.

monday march2 2012 in math class we were haveing a test so im like this is bull sh++. I am haveing a problem with test because i get to presherd by test so ask mr.boll to do it after school he ask why i seid because i have testing problem.

I am gonig to help frinds and family and my hom town and go out and shop for shoos and close tack my family out to eat. I am gone to go to g

racesisom is still a problem in this conchy. I think that is the reacon why Trayvon Marton was killed because jorg zimermen is a a++

people live life like they no meaning but they have meaning because all people have meaning we are us and yuo are yourslef i am me i can not be copyed i am one of acined i have my own mined set up that can't be dooplekated by eny one exseped god so you and hoow ever els can say what you whont to.

One day there was a man hoow was lukey because he finly got a date. So he gets redy for it and he gose to the shoow store to get some new grifes. Then he gose to impireer state billding to wate for her so a haf an hour gose past so he calls and see if she still comeing she did not answer the phone so he gose to her house but shes on her way there. O s he gose back to see if shes there she was not so he wated by time she came it was 12:50 at night so i sided i am leaving because you studed up so its over she seid why I just toled you good night. She called me in the morning she seid hi babby i seid i mr.mirror. How are you to day she sied im good i sied thats nice im fine so what did you whon she sied nothing just wounted to talk to you. Ok later i see her later on in the day and i sed hey how are you she sied good and you good.

A cead that i grow in to a flofy weed plant. that grow and grow in till

Yaeh bro i go ham in the paint

Pees love hope is all we have to give in life so people tacke it and waste it so why do we give it tell me why.