Makia+Hill

‍what happend to my new paints???
== **It was a very foggy day in the neighborhood when I noticed a flyer saying something about a carnival. The first thought that popped in my head is what do I have to wear? When I got home I ran in the kitchen to ask my mom for 50 dollars for my new outfit so I can look fly for the carnival, My mom gave me 20 more dollars to get me some baby doll shoes .WHEN I GOT TO THE MALL I WENT STRAIGHT TO RUE21. I knew they had a sell today. I got a whole outfit for 20 dollars and had 50 dollars left for my shoes and then found ten on the floor. That when I decided to get me a pair of blazers (shoes) witch where forty dollars. After that I caught the bus home so I can get ready for the carnival. Finally I arrived at the carnival and seen my friend Bob ,that when I remembered I didn't eat all day .So me and my friend, Bob went to the cheese fries stand and we got us some fries. When we were standing, eating are fries they begin to get soggy. When I looked across the feild i seen my teacher,Mr.Boll standing over by the games so I walked over I said hi. Then me and Bod got in line for the haunted house, as we stood in line we noticed the people coming out seemed very startled ,then we got even more excited to get in the haunted house. When we finally got inside the lights went off and it was pitch black, my heart dropped in my stomach I didn't know what was going on so I just started to run towards the exit. That's when all the lights quickly turned back on and I seen a big rip in the front of my new pair of paints. I went home ,when i walked in the door my mom asked me how was the carnival ,i did not respond cause i didnt want her to notice the big rip in the front of my new pair of paints. So I quickly ran up the stairs to change my paints but as soon as i went to take them off my mom walked in my room. "What happend to your paint",she asked i told her the story about the haunted house but i still didnt know how the rip got there. So then she dropped the conversation and told me to get in the shower and go to bed. "AND FROM THIS DAY ON I STILL DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEND TO MY NEW PAIR OF PAINTS".** == = =

==Good job Makita- way to work on this at home. It is good to have you in class again. Keep up the good work and you will do very well in this class. ==

THATS THE WAY I AM
= some friends are there for you some friends are'nt .They think if they do somthing to hurt you then can come back in your life, but thats not how stuff works.I go by the saying fool me once shame on you,fool me twice shame on me.They dont hurt no ones feelings but there own cause they lost one of the best friends they had ever had .I speek my mind and dont care what people think. "WHY" should i care im my own person and I am who I am cause thats how god made me. =

= i am who i am =

==Makita, you are a good writer who is developing a really strong voice. That is a good thing. I encourage you to keep writing as much as you can. It is good for many reasons, but I think this could be something that you are very good at. Keep working hard, and anytime you want to share something that you wrote with me I would love to take a look at it. == When i hear the statement; "injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere", it makes me wonder will my racis be treat the same as others. Will we stay be judged by the color of our skin. As i've been growing up off been hearing stories about injustice and it just dont seem fair,so if my father get caught sailing dope on the streets he gets sentenced about 6 to 12 years in jail,but if a white man get caught sailing dope he would get maybe 3 to 5 years in prison ? I dont understand that one bit we should'nt have to walk around worrieing about getting blamed for something just because of the color of our skin.As many people know 18 year old Jordan Miles was beatn by the cops cause they thought he had a gun in his pocket but all along it was a can of pop,why did they juss asume it was a gun they could of asked him wat was in his pocket before beating him.they attacked him because of the color of his skin they didnt even have to bother the boy walking home cause he was'nt bothering nobody.I Makita Hill beleave we should all be treated equaly and not deferantly cause the color of our skin. =true colors= I walk aroud with my head held high and a smile in on my face pretending nothings wrong.But little do yall knoe i go through alot some much i caint explain the pain i feel sometimes.Sometimes i wanna run and cry but i will never show my pain .I take the insults and the hit and keep a smile on my face thats just how i role but one thing i will tell you is that you will never put me down cause im proud the way i am and no one can change that about me

WISH I NEVER MET YOU
== When i first saw you i knew there was somthing about you your smile that lightens up the whole room or your lovely personality.Sometimes i sit here and think about the laughs we shared, our fights and many other things but through it all you stood there with me .Last year is when i noticed i loved you and always wanted you by my side i love you to death and heartbroken that you have to leave.But you need a clean slate and to get your grades together so if i love you i should be happy for you and show that im happy for you instead of worrieing about my feelings. I fell inlove with you cause you are caring and i can trust you .But now i wish i never met you cause it will be to hard for me to watch you leave. == = =

THE REAL ME You look at me and what do you see ? "you see a girl just a regular girl " but im more then that i am a girl with feelings i shed tears and im am very emotional likes most girls. I come off to you as this bully,and a fighter but thats just how i am sometimes when peolple push me to my point