Remy+Mcintyre

//Response 1:My thoughts of my community and school wouldn't be such nice thoughts. . My community is nice but its just the violence I don't really like. Ihear gun shots every other week and always hear aruging on the streets from neighbors on from people on the streets. The cops stay riding around like somethin bad is about to hppen and that just makes me somethimes nervous. How I feel about my school is different. I actually grew to like my school. Its not that bad but I can deal with it. I just don't like some of the teaches, only some. Its not the school thats bad doe, its the kids who think that school is ll fun and games that make others think it is a bad school. There are some people who wanna learn and there are others who don't really. But, I' one of those kids whose has there days but is here to actually get a education .//
 * //Remy//

Response 2: Today was the 5th Annual Carnival in town. Everybody was always excited when the time came that everybody goes to the carnival. The carnivals were always fun to go to. There was some to do at the carnival. You get to see some of the animals,play games,eat,win contest and etc. I was happy I got a new outfit for the carnival. Me and my friends planned al wearing the same shirt but different pants. I was happy I got a new pair of denim skinny jeans. Well anyways, we all met up in the center of the carnival about a half and hour later. Everyone decided to play a couple games first. I won myself two teddy bears and my friends won a couple of teddy bears too. Everybody decied to take a break from the games and go eat. I had a taste for some cheese fries and pizza. So I got a personal pan pizza and a medium cheese fry. I shared my fries with my friend Cadasia. We started grubbing on the fries until the fries got soggy from the cheese. I went to pick two fries up at the once, and one slipped and fell on my pants. I was so mad that my pants got a medium sized cheese stain on my pants. My friends told me that if I use hot water and wipe it, the stain will go away. I went to the bathroom got some paper towels and put hot water on them. I was now even more madder. The stain was worser, it loked like i peeed on my thigh. At least I enjoyed myself at the carnival and had fun with my friends. I thought it was best if i go home and get cleaned up.

Response 3: 10 Top Things I Would Want To Do Before I Die
 * Tell My Mom & Grandma I Love Them
 * Make Sure Me And My Mom Move Outta Wilkinsburg
 * Let Everybody Know How I Feel
 * Make Peace w/ Brother & Dad
 * Graduate & Go To College
 * Drive
 * Get A Degree In Something
 * Take My Little Sister On A Shopping Spree
 * Get My WHOLE Family Together For A Family Reunion

Response 4: A walk I take everyday would be in the morning on my way to school. Everyday I leave my house at around 7:10 and meet my friend Desa at the bottom of our hill. As I walk down the hill, I feel the cold wind brush against my face making me colder. I feel like somebody is watching me as I past all the abandon houses. Trash and garbage blow in every direction as the wind pushes harder. I soon see Desa appear in the distance walking towards me. From where i'm standing she looks like a magicain who just appeared in a blink of an eye. We walk down Rebbecca then onto coal towards franklin to go get our friend Ce-Ce. We pass a church that always makes a creaking noise noise when walking past the front entrance of it, yea kinda creepy. So we reach the building Ce-C lives in. I scream "Ciaraaaa, Ciaraaa", ! I feel like i'm in a cave screaming to see if anyone is in the cave with me. She soons comes out and we walk through the alley way. Theres a house with the door kicked down,and all the windows busted out with the wind blowing the left over blinds and curtain sheets in the window. 5 minutes later we reached the school. I had to walk up the big hill feeling like I was gonna fall right back down.

Response5: Acrostic Poems

**L**oving **I**n **F**reedom **E**very second

Second Poem **Y**our **O**wn **U**nique self : Remy- you are a good writer and thinker. Keep it up. I really enjoy reading your writing.

Response6: I'm describing my mom.I love my mom in every way. I love how she has her own style and dress different everyday. Shes a person who cares about others making sure everyones okay. I love how in the morning she wakes me up in a happy mood and keeps a smile on her face. The scent of her Poppy Coach perfume caught my nose by surprise. It smells so good like flowers in a garden, fresh and planted. The soft touch of her hand as she touches my face when i smile. Her smile is perfect and white like new pearls on a necklace. She inspires me to do everythng right as possible. Thats what a mom is suppose to do :-)

Response7: As i was countng money to put it up in the safe as a heard a loud crash and gas shattering. I was estatic when i saw that there was a car crashed into the window of the front entrance. Everybody started runing towards the elevators that lead to a private room. Babies crying,people screaming,police sirens made everything seem unbelieveable. Security guards started running to the window to see if somebody was in the passenger seat. Nobody wasn;t in the car so i didnt know what to do, I was still in shock. 10 min. later my boss and some of the guards told everybody to stay calm and that we had to say in the building for atleast 2 hours to find out what happened. I was happy no one got hurt.

Response 8: My name is Remy. When I think of my name I think of UNIQUE. I'm from a nieghborhood in Pittsburgh,Pa. I live with my mom. People would always describe me pretty,clean,sospisticated,confident,independent,funny,crazy,loving,caring and etc. I love reading urban fiction books,listening to music, nd i'm also starting to like writing or typing about my self. Sometimes listening to music or writing about certain help me express myself. I'm not good at alot of stuff nor am i talented. I do like to cheerleading and swim too.

Response 9: I would try to make this school a better place by tryoing to convince my friends that school really matters. Yea, its fun to talk bad to teachers and skip class , but thats not cute. It gets the kids no where in life. The teachers can even try to make learning more interesting and fun by still teaching academics with some creativness. Its not even the teachers that make it a bad learning place, its the children. They don't listen. They like to do what the don't do at home in school because they know teachers really can't do nothing about it bout but write them up and send them to the ofice. Kids need to start taking school seriously because the grade we are in now matters. Next year, whose knows if school will still be a priority to some people that focus hard now. But next year, I know I will be a freshman. And then on, the rest of my grades matter.

Response 10:There once was a superhero named Orah. She was the type of superhero who would come to your rescuse no matter what time of day. She believed in saving people and thats exactly what she did. One day while she was sitting at her kitchen table about to eat breakfast, she heard a scream. She instanly did a quick twirl and snapped her fingers. And there she was in her all black leather suit with her knee high black heels. She rushed to her bathroom where everything was white as cotton. She quickly brushed her hair and went to he rescue.

5 mintues later she was standing outside of the window seal to see where the scream came from. The scream was from the 5th floor balcony. Orah, saw a girl getting jumped by three other girls. Orah jumped from her balcony on the 10th floor down to the 5th.The girls didn't notice her until she used her hand with wind power and pushed them all down. They all got up and tried to attack her, but Orah pushed them again. This time they stayed sitting there so Orah went over to the girl. She asked her wat her name was and where does she hurt. Her name was Mariah and her upper thigh and eye were both slighty bruised. Orah screamed at the three girls and told them to get outta her and never came back. They all rushed each other inside the house to the front door. She helped Mariah up adn took her inside the house. She asked why did they jumpe her. Mariah said because she always dress nice and always win everything so they bully and beat her up. Orah notcied blood was begaining to flow in the middle of her forehead. Orah told Mariah to sit still. Orah put her hands up to Mariah's head and it looked like the sun was shining her forehead and was slowly fixing her bruise and made it look like she was never bleeding. Mariah looked at Orah, smiled and said thank you. Orah became like a big sister to Mariah. Orah was really there when needed, she helped plenty of people. She was one of the best super heroes and never failed to come to somebody's resuce.

Response 12: As I Walked Down The Long Dark Black Hallway ,I Felt Scared To Death. I Thought Any Moment Something Was Gonna Jump Out On Me. I Felt Like Demons Were Looking At Me Laughing Because They Knew I Was Scared. Every Step I Took Closer Down The Hall, My Foot Steps Made The Floor Creak. I Felt Like I Was The Girl In Paranormal Activity When She Snuck Down the Step To See Who Was There. I Wanted To So Bad Walk Down The Hallway To The Last Room On The Left Because I Saw A Light. I Didn’t Know What To Expect. . . Nobody Has Went In That Room In The Past 5 Years. I Went To Take Another Step Then Stopped Dead In My Tracks, I Heard A Noise Or Something. I Stood Still For Minute Thinking Should I Keep Going. I Was So Close, Just 5 More Steps. I Counted To Myself “1...2...3...4...5”. . Pushed The Door Open. BOOM !! I Was So Scared I Blacked Out. All I Know Is There Was A Little Girl Laying On A Bed Tied Up With Blood Splattered Everywhere, On The Walls , Floor, And Her Dress Was Ripped. I Ran Back Down The Hallway To Find Away To Get Out. Soon I Threw Up From Being Over Whelmed. I Felt {People Screaming At Me. So I Realized I Was Screaming At Myself. I Tried To Calm Down, Started Running More. I Fell, Tripped, And Twisted My Ankle. HELP HELP I Screamed But Nobody Answered Me. I Was Alone And Scared.....Sitting In That Dark Hallway.

Response 12:It seemed like a normal PSSA week in Wilkinsburg. Kid scame for three days straight,took their,and left at lunch to enhoy the new spring weather. However as i look back on what went down that week, it was anything but normal. For one, there was a food fight. All you hear is ebverybpdy screaming and trying to duck and hide. The food and trays fly across the room so fast that it looked like colors were going pass. The teachers were trying to calm everybody down but then a teacher got pushed into a garbage can and fell. Next all the security guards started slipping and falling one after another because juice was spilled. I thought I got hit with food but I didnt. Soon I noticed

Response 13:I AM Picture

Response 14:
 * August 29th, Monday , First day of school. I didn't know where none of my classes were.
 * August 30th, Tuesday , I had my first argument with a girl who thought she was a superhero.

Sunday, December 25th, 2011. Dear Diary, Today is Christmas and I am estatic. I've been dying for Christmas of 2011. Everybody was over last night for Christmas Eve and My granddad's birthday. Some how the tree fell over, everybody was laughing but I was actually mad as ever that the tree fell and they are sitting laughing about it. They told me to lighen up, its Christmas and who cares. I was mad all the chicken was gone.For the rest of the week I slept

Response 15:If I Won 100 Million Dollars I Would: Make Sure Me And My Mom Move And Get A Bigger House I Would Pre-Pay All The Bills. Light,Gas,Phone For A Whole Year I Would Also Give My Grandma Atleast 2,000 For Herself I Would Start Investing In My College Fund I Would Open A Daycare Center For My Mom And Make It The Best Play And Learning Center For Toddlers. I Would Put The Rest In A Safe.

Response 16: My Bad And Good Side My good side can be descibed as.... hmm just ME ! I love living life. My god side takes over power of my alter ego, which is my bad side. I don't wanna sit around feeling sd about any and everything. I don't wanna walk around always having a attitude and etting smart with people, Three things to remeber being on my good side is to : ( L.I.V.E, L.A.U.G.H , & L.O.V.E , <3 . ]

Now my bad side. My bad side usualy isn't good. I usually just seem not to care about nobody and nothing. You can rather say (i'm in my bag ). But I just usually sit around with a attitude and mad at the world. I really think im Bipolar. One minute i'm having fun and laughing, then next i'm screaming at somebody. I'm learning to conrol it a little better. So I kep my good side out. Life is too short to be mad at the world all the time. So, just remember what I said. ( L.I.V.E, L.A.U.G.H , & L.O.V.E , <3 . ]

Response 17: Zimmerman needs to be arrested. Its not right to just shoot someone becaue they had a hoodie on walking through a alleyTrayvon Martin was a teen like me. That is so sad he had to get his life taken away by someone who decided it was right to shoot a teen walking through the alley. Since he was nieghborhood watch, he felt he should takematters into his own hands. Like serously, how can someone by so cold hearted. I feel bad for Trayvon Martin. He was just a teen. I'm just sick of the news showing Trayvon,Trayvon,Trayvon. Let him rest in peace. Yes, Zimmerman was wrong and neeeds to be arrested but Trayvon needs a rest. I wish I could suport his family because if I was in a situation like this, I would want the whole nation wanting to support my famil and for Zimmerman to get justice.

Response 18:Did my response on my homework for the diary of Anne Frank.

Response 19: It took me a leap year to know that birds fly. I thought they only crawl. I felt so slow like a turtle when it walks. Me and my dog sat at the kitchen table eating our pizza on our plates. I was thinking about the pigs flying around in my room. I was watching as my mom folded clothes and wached the bears play tag. The house was shaking like a earthquake. It started to rain cats and dogs. My dog went to the window, walked through it and fly to the sky jus to drop his self down to the ground like the rest of them. Just watching it rain i got sleepy. I went to the den and laid next to the mommy bear and went to sleep.

Response 20: Writing Prompt #193


 * My homework falls in a puddle of water
 * Theres A Car Crash
 * A Bridge Almost Falls On Me
 * A Old Man Is Following Me
 * A Crackhead Asked Me For A Nickel
 * I Got Hit By A Bus
 * Somebody Car's Tires Fell Off While Driving
 * I Got Hit With A Car Door
 * Somebody Stole My Computer.

Response 21: Creative Writing Prompt #219 I Deserve A. ( Job ]

Response 22: Creative Writing Prompt #319


 * Tell Her Everyrthing
 * Take picutes for memoires
 * talk day and night
 * won't be bored
 * discuss problems
 * help each other do homework

Respone #23:Happines. I like when people feel my mood. I feel like nothing else matter when people know they are happy. I am happiness, a bundle of joy. I am mood that people are most of the time and day. I feel as though the people who fell my have something to smile for. Instead of being sad, be happy. Everyone knows its the pursuit of happines.

Response #24: Everyone tells you, they are the best years of your life. The thing they don't tell you, is they are all full of strife. From a child to a teen, in less then a year. It's a lot to deal with, you have to grow up fast. As a child you're free, as a teen you feel locked up. A child has no worries, A teen has a lot. You learn the meaning of love, you discover broken hearts. The worries of being accepted, are the hardest part of all. What's the best about these years? When as a teen, we live in fear.

Response #25:

I'm Starting With The Man In The Mirror (Ooh!) I'm Asking Him To Change His Ways (Ooh!) And No Message Could Have Been Any Clearer If You Wanna Make The World A Better Place (If You Wanna Make The World A Better Place) Take A Look At Yourself And Then Make A Change (Take A Look At Yourself And Then Make A Change)