Justice+Rawlings

= = [] http://blabberize.com/view/id/724277 = = = = =Justice = =So one day i was in a car goin 90 mph on the highway cause = =i needed to get to mr.bolls class i was late i had to do my book = =presintaion in front of the class i was so upset cause if i did not = =get there in time it would be an F for my paper i did alot of = =hard work but i got there in the nick of time when i got into the = =classroom i seen a little boy with a snowball i was scared cause = =they had them aimed at me so i ran down the hallway to = =mr.boll's room i was goin faster then my car ......! = =ok so i went into = = = =Justice- Great start. Keep it up. I like the metaphor when you say you were "moving faster than my car." Well done. I'm glad you are in this class = The hurt the hurt and lies it makes me wanna scream and cry you put me through so much I thought we were best friend till the end but I gotta move on you were never my friend im hurt and ima let you go cause I cant take to more I wish you fear well but you cant never come in my life again ima nice person you purshed me to the limit but we are never goin be friends im sorry you hurt so bad but I had to learn to show you how I feel cause i felt so dumb bein your friend everybody told me to leave you alone i did not listen now im traped in my emotins

Justice- I'm not sure if any of this is your own writing. DO YOUR OWN WORK! I know you can. dear kita me and you been friend fo so long you were there when I needed you when I needed to cry to someone when I had a lot of pain we been through a lot you showed me that nobody can break up our friendship and im happy you are my bestfriend we can talk about anythng and you get mad but get over it cause we are true friend <3

so one day kita & I went for a walk to the b&g club we were bored and we seen aaron and chops they were playin football so me and kita went to the store it was funny cause i almost fell down

Justice- You are improving so much as a student. Some of your writing here is very good. Keep working hard and writing as much as you can in my class. There are some days (Friday) when you need to be working harder and respecting the rules of the class (watch your language). I know you can do it. Keep working hard.

so what makes me, me is bein crazy and loud but what also makes me , me is bein funny and i also like to write i have a book the i just write all mythoughts but thats what makes me ,me <3 :' )

so what would ake this school better if kids and teachers made and effort to do the right thing and help each other to make the school better cause as of now the school is like a jungel so nobody really wants to send there kids here so i need the staff to work on tryn to make it safer so kids can feel safe

in 30 years i see myself with a very good job and a family and bein rich cause ill invent something that everybody will want/need cause im smart and i have the brains for it i will have 2 kids a boy and girl and ima try not to get in trouble and end up in jail for dumb stuff so thats my plan

 When you're feeling down and blue, And life is being cruel to you, Just remember you're not on your own, I'm always there you're never alone, You might not be able to see my face, As hard as you look around the place, But close your eye's and think of me, And before you know it there will be me, Keep me in the midst of your mind, And life will seem easier I think you'll find, So when life gets to dark to bare, Just close your eye's and I will be there

 Justice- you have a really strong poetic voice. I don't know if all of this is your own, but I am pretty sure that most of it is. Keep writing. I don't see you super hero project here, so let me know if you are struggling with that. Good work on poetry. Keep writing more.    it seemed like a normal PSSA week in wilkinsburg, kids came for three straight days , took their test and left at lunch to enjoy the new spring weather however as i look back on what went down that week it was anything but normal .... we wentout the door <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> []

friends are people who will be there threw thick and thin you can tell them anything

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;">today is march 28th 2012 <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;">its very rainy and it makes me sad when it rains i become my alter ego jasmine and she is the sad one i hope everything <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;">is ok i think it goin be a lil okay cause i have my bestfriend (s) and when i become jasmine im very quiet so lets see what the day <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;">brings <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> i think that trayvon martin needs "justice" <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> cause this crime should not have  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> happen he had a gun and he called his self  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> neighbior hood watch captin but some how nobody  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> is that neighborhood didn't know about neighbior hood  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> watch program but the fact that zemmermain had a gun a shot  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> trayvon just cause he had a hoodie that shows that he is races  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> and deserves to rot in jail he should have never shot nobody =")  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> DEAR, MOMMA <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> YOU WERE THE ONE WHO RAISED ME ON YOUR OWN UR THE OINE  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> WILL NOT LEAVE ME ALONE I LOVE YOU AND I HOPE YOUR STILL HERE  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> WHEN I GET GROWN I KNOW YOU WANNA SEE DOING MY BEST & I TRY TO  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> DO BETTER THEN THE REST CAUSE YOU KNOW I CAN GET A'S AND B'S ON TEST  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> 5-7-5 <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> WHEN I TRY TO LEAVE <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> THEY TRYIN MAKE ME STAY HERE  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"> I KNOW ITS NOT GOOD

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;"> today is april.27.2012

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">i think that the wods we cant say <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">are the words we shall not say  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">and the thing we cant do are the  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">things we shouldn't do and the  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">thing we dont see are the thing we  <span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #000000; display: block; text-align: left; text-decoration: none;"><span style="background-color: #8e00ff; color: #000000; font-family: "Comic Sans MS",cursive; font-size: 200%;">shouldn't see