Alonzo+Moore

Hi my name is alonzo another kid from WMS the most coolest school in the us.But lets get back on track,i have a cool super power i am a vampire.Sure it sounds cool,but it is really a curse.Trust me if you had to eat donated blood from a plastic bag u would feel the way i feel every day.Plus,my worst problem is that the girl i like does not like me.

She is so cute,she is short,and she has brown hair.But lets get back on topic sometimes i get a little distracted.In the day time i am regular old boring a Alonzo but at night i am super tilt,avenger of death otherwise known as V dude. The only people that know my secret are my mom and my best friend Xavier.I have a lot of powers first i have fangs,i can fly,i can disappear,and i can read peoples thoughts.

Alonzo- THis is great! I was right, you are a good writer. Keep working on this story. I like the style and voice that you are showing here. You are talented man, keep working hard.